angel'maria <3

Original Poem:

Me:

When I look at my past 
my life seems to be going by fast
all the events are memorable
always varying, not all pleasurable
leaving my father being most permanent 
it was my mother choosing to be determinant
i had to overcome my depression 
but haven't managed my aggression
now when i take a step back 
look at my life and see my track
its experience  that makes my personality
in my point of view, my individuality
at seven years old
i had a secret i never told
my life started a destruction
hurting myself was the introduction
at eleven years old
my life started to unfold
i ignored what everyone thought
my anger is what i fought

now my best quality, is very well defined
that is my independent mind
i have a strange sense of humor and frivolity
all of which are my best quality
i have high confidence
and know its prominence
i have an uncontrollable conniption
but cant deny its my description
i like to be creative
and act probative
i keep in touch with my fashion sense
dressing nice doesn't need extra expense
my future is in my dreams
happiness is what it screams
but nothing of extremes
i don't wish to be a millionaire
life enough is debonair
happiness is my wish
not at all to be rich
until then my life is in construction
and no one will be an obstruction

my analysis

so, i mostly like poetry that say something i can relate to. i like poetry about life; some about love, friendships, and other things but mostly the hardships that people face on a daily bases. sometimes i think i have it the worst but when i read what other people go through, it makes me think how much i should appreciate everything i have. i have analyzed three different poems: "Just Another Day in the Life of...", "My dearest Drug Friend", and "Their Pain". all these share my interest.