Eylin :)
Original Poem
Life is like a mountain.
We try to reach the top
although the struggles slow us down
we get up and fight them off.
A mountain goes up,
its what we try to do
but it also goes down
its what some people choose to do,
things get in the way
but those things help us get stronger
in the journey that gets harder.
We try to reach the top
although the struggles slow us down
we get up and fight them off.
A mountain goes up,
its what we try to do
but it also goes down
its what some people choose to do,
things get in the way
but those things help us get stronger
in the journey that gets harder.
Testimony Poem
it snowed this morning
The first time this winter,
i felt the cold as i left my house
to get potatoes, about ninety pounds
Than suddenly i thought again,
of fate of my brethren, in the east.
I always think of them.
I pray for the salvation, which does not come
hoping i could speedily arrive
that god have mercy on his people
who are in terrible plight
The first time this winter,
i felt the cold as i left my house
to get potatoes, about ninety pounds
Than suddenly i thought again,
of fate of my brethren, in the east.
I always think of them.
I pray for the salvation, which does not come
hoping i could speedily arrive
that god have mercy on his people
who are in terrible plight
my analysis
poems are a great way to say what your feeling...a good poem to me is usually about life. Life comes in different perspective, colors, and shapes. Its eaither hard or good, it like a circle of life. We live it everyday and as we grow up it get more complicated, but we learn from our mistakes we meet great people or bad people. life is such a good thing. life is inspiration. the two poems i analyzed are "circle of life" and "complicated"
